On Success

Why do so many people reach success and then fail? It should be a thesis statement.

John was one of people who reached success and then fail. He made some mistakes on his business. First, he had too much confidence after he made it. Second, he stoped working hard and pushed himself and he just went back and relax. Third, he was working on managing even though he was not good at to. Finally, when he had depression, he bought a sports car to fix it and depended on taking antidepressant pills. Money and pills never made it better.

Success is not one way to go, he should have been keep working on these, passion, work, focus, push, ideas, improve, serve, persist and then he wouldn't fail. "Success is a continuous journey." This is the main point of John's presentation.